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Pale
Contributed by
luinil
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:27:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Close your eyes
And the moon will dim its shine
Im so cold tonight
Hate to breathe now but Ill try
The sun wont rise
And snow falls softly where you lie
I wont ask why
But I never promised not to cry
Time rolls by
To leave you alone here cant be right
No end this night
So Ill stay here frozen by your side
Copyright ©
luinil
... [
2004-12-12 18:27:27]
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Re: Pale
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:05:03 PM AEST
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wow this is a great write.. losing something does suck.. I hope you over come this loss
Peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: Pale
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by killingmehslowly on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:31:23 PM AEST
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| great write |
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Re: Pale
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by Apolla on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:32:23 PM AEST
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| This is very passionate I know how loss can test a person's soul. |
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Re: Pale
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:40:16 PM AEST
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| wow, awesome, i love it!! |
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