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if you dont like me you!
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:41:20 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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if you dont like the way i vent,screw you i dont need consent!,
if you dont like the way i think,screw you ill have myself a drink!,
if you dont care for what i say,then screw you it all goes away!,
if you dont like the way i talk,screw you take a walk!
if you dont accept that i cut,then screw you this is my rutt!,
if you dont want to understand my pain,then screw you dont complain!,
if you cant see why im so mad,then screw you i dont feel bad!,
if you think im listening to your self pittied advice,your talkin to a wall if you cant be nice!,
if you think i dont care about letting go,then screw you!you dont know!,
if you think im crazy and a bit lazy,then screw you go pick a flower miss daisy!
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Re: if you dont like me you!
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:46:30 PM AEST
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Great write 5 stars. If you don't like the way i write the crew you i love it Good job.
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Re: if you dont like me you!
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:43:29 PM AEST
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i liked this....great job....awesome poem
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears
PS thanks for commmenting on my poem
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Re: if you dont like me you!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:20:18 PM AEST
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This is a great write, its Good that u don't give a f *** about what people say or think, thats good,this write is good and a lil bit funny with the whole
" if you think im crazy and a bit lazy,then screw you go pick a flower miss daisy! "
Thats funny, but makes sense lol Great Write |
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Re: if you dont like me you!
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by athena on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:56:12 PM AEST
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haha love it, i have those days too loved
readin it!
*athena |
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Re: if you dont like me you!
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by namesaretaken on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:47:31 AM AEST
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If this is your new way of thinking Iam happy for you I have a hard time not caring what others think
I liked this line the best
"if you think im crazy and a bit lazy,then screw you go pick a flower miss daisy!"
It made me chuckle a little bit
Good stuff
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Re: if you dont like me you!
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by iodinelove on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:24:16 AM AEST
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I don't like the rhymes ^_^
but not bad....you either have a loud voice....or a very small one....keep writing....it's good for you(better than apples)
and don't forget to floss ^_^
always, abraham |
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Re: if you dont like me you!
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:23:11 PM AEST
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I'm just a 40 year old Miss Daisy myself!! Listen chick, I know you so... I can comment on this probably better than anyone except for maybe Peter. I say if you don't want advice from others, don't come cryin' to them and don't come tell your sad damn stories to them. Don't come to your friends with your bleeding wrists that you scratched up over and over again, balling and crying. Don't come crying to your friends about guys saying naughty stuff to you when you dress like a slut. Don't come whining about that you have no food to eat or clothes to wear when you're just too freakin' lazy to take care of yourself. So have your new way of thinking and wallow in your self-pity. Just keep it to yourself. I feel real sorry for you and wish you much peace, I hope one day you grow up.
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