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Forgotten
Contributed by
Black_Rose
on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 06:46:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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A girl is sitting in the night;
Can you see her? Can you feel her
Freeze? The night is blackened by her pain,
The skies are clouded with her death.
She makes no sounds, utters no protest;
Simply watches as he kills her once more,
One last time.
And now, what remains but night?
Night, faithful companion to her dying die.
The heavy darkness folds around her, closing her in,
Protecting her.
And in death's friendly hand, her soul is forever enclosed.
Copyright ©
Black_Rose
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2004-12-12 18:46:25]
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Re: Forgotten
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:03:27 PM AEST
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awesome write!! gives you an erie feeling.. its terrible when people have to be sad..
Peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: Forgotten
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:08:31 PM AEST
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Intense write
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: Forgotten
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by Apolla on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:30:26 PM AEST
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| Incredible and very very passionate. |
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Re: Forgotten
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:37:24 PM AEST
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| awesome, i love it!!! well done! |
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Re: Forgotten
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:13:33 PM AEST
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This is a speachless write, very powerful,
I really enjoyed reading this, Gread Write !!!!!! |
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Re: Forgotten
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 08:14:47 PM AEST
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| Sorry i ment to say * Great Write * |
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Re: Forgotten
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by hot-shot on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:11:30 AM AEST
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hmmm.....beautiful its really wonderful...
Love..
hav fun & hugzzzzzz
hot-shot |
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Re: Forgotten
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by pixie on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:13:22 AM AEST
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that was brilliant, great poem,
pixie xx |
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