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I'll Do It
Contributed by
Artemis03
on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:35:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'll do it
Don't think I won't
1, 2, thr--, "DON'T!"
I don't care what you say...
"STOP!, please there's a better way."
You know i'll do it.
Don't bother stopping me
I'm through with it all, everything,
My life, having to live this lie.
My better way is just to die.
End the suffering and--
"Listen to yourself, you're talking crazy!"
No it's not crazy, it's all the truth maybe...
So, there no stopping me
I'm setting myself free
from the pain, sorrows, and misery.
"You can't do this!"
Watch me..
1,2, three.........................
Copyright ©
Artemis03
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2004-12-12 19:35:43]
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Re: I'll Do It
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by Apolla on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:40:08 PM AEST
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| Deep, very, very, deep. I know I've felt this way before.... it really took you courage to write. I love ya. |
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Re: I'll Do It
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by athena on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:41:09 PM AEST
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O-M-G...one of your best poems i have read so far.
all's i can saw is wow.
from 1 goddes to another,
*athena |
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Re: I'll Do It
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by killingmehslowly on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:00:37 AM AEST
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| i love it. I really do. I've had this struggle, and as you can see i'm still here. It's so hard to live when depressed yet harder still to give in and die. Deep poem, great write. -Sami- |
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Re: I'll Do It
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by redtempest13 on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:27:31 PM AEST
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| Wow. Very good. I have a lot of those written, but not posted yet. Just...wow. Keep writing. You're very good at it. |
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