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don't deal with anything
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:39:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Dreaming and screaming
darkness surrounding
sadness overtaking
nothings golden
everything glitters
until you touch it
once you taste a side of heaven
you get trapped in some part of hell
everythings unstable
lay it all on the table
then run far far away
deal with nothing
leave it all behind
JENNI
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PhantomVampyress
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2004-12-13 00:39:34]
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Re: don't deal with anything
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:10:30 AM AEST
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this once upon a long time ago was me.
Very good work.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: don't deal with anything
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by karmen on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:24:28 AM AEST
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| i like this write a lot... its something i would relate to a while ago. |
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Re: don't deal with anything
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 01:55:34 AM AEST
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| awesome, i love it! |
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Re: don't deal with anything
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by UnlovedChild on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:28:33 PM AEST
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| Aww sweet poem Jenni. I'm sure many can relate. Great job! |
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Re: don't deal with anything
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:19:00 PM AEST
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| little do they know, the problems can run faster than they ever can. this needs some work on rhyme scheme though. but once that is done, this is perfect. |
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Re: don't deal with anything
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 02:09:20 AM AEST
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| Great write. I really enjoyed it. Nice work. |
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