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Under The Spell
Contributed by
desperatesoul
on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:38:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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2003
Under The Spell
If your life is stalling
and you are falling,
You hear it calling
Beware.....
If you are waiting
Anticipating
What lies in store
for you there?
Taking you on A journey
to A place of screaming
laughter,
You'll be lost in the end...
Your mind is racing
Almost tasting it,
You are soon out of time,
While your learning
your candles burning,
Ever deeper you climb.......
Like A soul trapped in
Hell
You are
Under The Spell......
Come closer my friend,
Gaze into the
Ancient Pages,
Learn the
Secrets of the
Ages.....
You may have all you
DESIRE,
But,
The Weak of Mind, will Burn in the Fire................
by: $av
Dana (san diego Crystal Creek)
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2004-12-13 02:38:12]
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Re: Under The Spell
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by witch_derna on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 06:43:55 AM AEST
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An interesting and great write :)
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Re: Under The Spell
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 03:16:42 PM AEST
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I love the this line!
Ever deeper you climb.......
thought provoking, deep write! |
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