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sweet, sweet slumber

Contributed by bopeep on Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

sweet, sweet slumber
thirst prevailing hunger.
shiny-shiny stars,
dreams stored in jars.

sweet, sweet slumber
make the kingdom humbler.
shiny-shiny stars,
fly me to mars

in this sweet, sweet slumber...

Copyright Â© bopeep ... [ 2002-11-27 12:30:00]
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Re: sweet, sweet slumber (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 02:25:31 AM AEST
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oooh oooh ooh i like this one. i like the shiny shiny stars part! pretty good. ya gotta add some more though!! ike that gambler's one or somehtin.. .cant remember. well tootaloo

hug a moose!

Re: sweet, sweet slumber (User Rating: 1 )
by nightrider on Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 03:29:53 PM AEST
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i really like this! it is soooooo peaceful, and peace is a rarely-found gift. i really enjoyed it, thanks!!

Re: sweet, sweet slumber (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 09:52:36 PM AEST
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I liked this one alot it reminds me
of a new type of nursery rhyme. It's
beautiful thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: sweet, sweet slumber (User Rating: 1 )
by frickinflamer on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 01:47:33 AM AEST
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this is short and perky! go emma! perky perky perky!!! haha! you should make this one longer though...

Re: sweet, sweet slumber (User Rating: 1 )
by Mya on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 04:31:02 PM AEST
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Nice writin

Re: sweet, sweet slumber (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarah22 on Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 11:20:49 PM AEST
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i like this poem
it was worth
the reading .

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