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The Well
Contributed by
Damon_Maynard
on
Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 01:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I were, Im in, Im sick, fixed and lifted,
I know, Im all I can fly affliction.
I see, Ive seen, Ive been insistent,
I cant be seen in the dark... a victim.
I know the day has much to be sad,
I knew, I could, be covered, Ive been had.
I fight, some nights, with bees that cry,
I hear them scream, burn and collapse inside.
I sew the stiches around the eyelids,
I hate to be left, when seals get violent.
Im sure that I could feel it coming,
Ive shaken the hope, Ive kept on running.
Im not so blind that I just blindside it,
Paper, porcelain, smash... decided.
I might not be the key, I may,
I think, Ill strike, or hide, or stay.
Ill lie, and Ill take this chance and fill...
This hole with water, drown, and stay still.
Copyright ©
Damon_Maynard
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2002-11-27 13:30:00]
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Re: The Well
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 03:53:32 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful, you definately have a unique style all of your own. I enjoyed this one alot. Thanks fo sharing it. Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: The Well
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 06:10:13 PM AEST
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The last four lines were awesome, those and
"I fight, some nights, with bees that cry
I hear them scream, burn and collapse inside"
Good write Damon! |
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