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Let Me Be (What Do You Want From Me)
Contributed by
killingmehslowly
on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 03:34:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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What do you want from me Why can't you let me be Are you trying to ruin my life Do you want me to pick up my knife Leave me alone Before I cut to the bone I really want to die Are you happy now, You've made me cry What did I do wrong Do you want me dead, that won't take long What do you want from me Do you enjoy my misery Why can't you let me be Just want to fly away and be free This can't get any worse It's like you're some sort of curse You're everywhere, why are you there Why can't I get you out of my hair Why won't you go away And let me die on the spot where I lay.
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Re: Let Me Be (What Do You Want From Me)
(User Rating: 1 ) by EternalNight4x on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 03:41:35 PM AEST (User
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excellent write, you expressed your anger very well...i can also very much relate to this..well keep on posting |
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Re: Let Me Be (What Do You Want From Me)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Unheard_Mute on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 03:41:48 PM AEST (User
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look sami, forget about whatever her name is, if she's a bad friend, screw her... and david wouldn't believe something stupid like you cheating on him or something like that, he wouldn't get jealous or anything and you know it, ignore her... |
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Re: Let Me Be (What Do You Want From Me)
(User Rating: 1 ) by CrimsonTears on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:30:19 PM AEST (User
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this is great...i can relate to this....great work....i loved it....excellent job
Lots of Love
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Re: Let Me Be (What Do You Want From Me)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 11:07:12 PM AEST (User
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powerful and emotional poem. though its sad the inspiration is what it is. |
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Re: Let Me Be (What Do You Want From Me)
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jen54 on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:36:46 PM AEST (User
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I loved it!!! I hits really close to home. Keep up the good writing.
-Jen |
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