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The Walk, The Goodbye
Contributed by
OhSaige
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Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:48:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Under the old rustic archway I enter,
Beginning my walk on hallowed ground.
Reading the names of resting souls,
A labyrinth of prolonged and shortened lives.
My bones feel a chill as I approach.
But my heart warms as I know you are near.
Your name etched in stone reads like a poem.
Feeling each letter I whisper my goodbyes.
Surrounded by so many that passed before you.
A family collection of so much lost love.
Most robbed of life to early,
One so selfishly given away.
My tears like raindrops fall to the soil,
Watering your seeds of love for a spring bloom.
Pain, sorrow and happiness all reside,
Our bodies have parted our talks will last forever.
As I say my final goodbyes the fog lifts,
The suns rays begin to find there way.
I know it is your tender heart smiling.
Warming me like the daily sunrise.
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OhSaige
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2004-12-13 20:48:22]
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Re: The Walk, The Goodbye
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by MMISS on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:18:57 PM AEST
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| THIS IS A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM! FIRST TIME I'VE EVER READ ONE ON THE SUBJECT . WONDERFULLY, EXCELLENTLY WRITTEN. |
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Re: The Walk, The Goodbye
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:36:40 PM AEST
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| amazing write. brilliant first stanza. it had excellent use of flow. beautiful. |
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Re: The Walk, The Goodbye
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by Ada on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 03:05:04 AM AEST
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| It's a beautiful poem... |
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Re: The Walk, The Goodbye
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by musicisluv7 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 03:29:15 AM AEST
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excellent use of words! splendid poem!
much luv xx |
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Re: The Walk, The Goodbye
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:37:44 AM AEST
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so sad emotional and written so beautifully
pixie xx |
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