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Breakdown
Contributed by
KOZMICSPIRID
on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:50:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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words are released
hopes are raised
we are the children of the future
ready for a new phase
disspiutes among many
races enraged
we are ready for a new beginning
a whole new stage
no more room for pointless rage
people in power shaking in their seats
we will be heard
power of the unique
equality must rule simplistic desires
doing what we were summond
to break down this materialistic empire
Copyright ©
KOZMICSPIRID
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2004-12-13 20:50:48]
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Re: Breakdown
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:34:59 PM AEST
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| amazing write. great rhymes illustrated well thought concepts. |
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Re: Breakdown
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:16:41 AM AEST
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Simple and hopeful.
Welcome to ypdc.
Keep writing. |
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Re: Breakdown
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 01:12:20 AM AEST
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Awesome!
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emy |
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