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all im left with
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 09:55:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You were like the sun
Shining bright in my darkened days
Admiring my face made me feel special
In so many ways
But I found out you love her
It was like a knife in the heart
Why didnt you want me?
Why did we part?
I look upon you every day
Holding her hand and not mine
You cant imagine how it feels
To lie to yourself that everythings fine
Are you this arrogant as to what you put me through?
To my intense hurt and why I look so blue?
Numb from the heartache
I feel asleep although awake
Your fake smiles are completely useless
They no longer work on me
You want them to charm my heart
But I see right through them cant you see?
It kills me to look at you
So ill keep walking straight ahead
Im not gonna stop and say hi
My forlorn emotions cannot be said
You discovered something about me
Now wanting nothing because of this
It doesnt change who I am
How could you give up these moments of bliss?
I feel the shame of a truth thats mine
helpless and confused and forever tainted by your lips
My body you abused
What you did was hurtful and unfair
Dismissing me as a nobody
Feelings of worthlessness i now have to bear
Numb from the heartache
I feel asleep although awake
Soon to be gone
Your presence will be lost
Will you grace me with a goodbye?
Despite the wrong and cost?
Will you be happy far away from here?
Will you forget me or close to your heart keep me near?
Theres an emptiness inside of me
I cannot seem to fill
To just hang on
To just survive
Takes all my strength and will
Now youre leaving
Its easy to say goodbye
With so many things kept unsaid
I need to break down and cry
Out of my life and out of my sight
Youre taking my heart with you and there is nothing I shall gain
Now all Im left with is my own anguish and pain
My will begins to weaken
My hope and strength begins to fade
Suddenly my mind seems clear as I reach for the blade
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Re: all im left with
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by Jenn2004 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 12:52:07 AM AEST
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| Great write, i never had to deal with a bf leaving me for another girl. I never seen any of my exs with another girl either. Usually they just dump me for stupid things like they dont want a relationship, or wont tell me why they ended it with me. I never really been with many guys to feel like that, but i have had enough broken hearts to make me not want to love again ever. This last guy i just had, i wrote that poem "hurt again" based on him. I thought he was my everything, but i realized that he wont, and now im left with a another broken heart. |
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Re: all im left with
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 10:39:47 AM AEST
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| This is another great write that is easy to relate to it will get more reads and comments just be patient |
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Re: all im left with
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by weepingprophet on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 04:28:12 PM AEST
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| one heart. one love. you can peice a puzzle back together but our lives are forever torn by the illusion of love. what is love but an emotional attachment, if it can be broken. I beleive that love is the only restoration of broken hearts. Love is immeasurable, a man who would leave and not return as a better offering is not a man worthy or even capable of true love. I have tasted true love and to lose it would hurt but it would make me indefinately stronger. Death is the only fatal gatekeeper of love. |
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