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Broken
Contributed by
TheRavenousOne
on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 11:54:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I feel broken,
Like you smashed me on the ground,
Breaking me into a thousand pieces.
Then you took my heart,
And smashed that too.
All because I let myself love you.
And now I try to pick up those pieces
And put them back together with glue,
But Im missing pieces,
Im so incomplete.
I hope youre proud of you.
I still feel this pain,
As I try to pick myself up and walk.
But Im missing pieces,
So I fall right back.
And as I start to cry,
My tears hit the ground,
And they break too.
Im tired of being broken,
But Im afraid to get up,
I try and try and try,
But with no such luck.
So as I lay here dying,
Knowing Im broken and useless,
I hope youre happy that you did this.
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TheRavenousOne
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2004-12-14 11:54:16]
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Re: Broken
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 11:57:15 AM AEST
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very dark, sad and well written,
pixie xx |
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Re: Broken
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 02:53:08 PM AEST
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very sad...i know this feeling so well....great job
Lots of Love
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Re: Broken
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 03:27:01 PM AEST
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| wow iv felt like this so many times...its nice to know i can relate with somone. i really liked this |
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Re: Broken
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by Apolla on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:47:03 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem just remeber to keep your head up. |
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