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Longing for death
Contributed by
Apolla
on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:57:16 PM in AEST
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I lie here,
Longing for death,
For my body to be set free.
Only then I know,
Then, I shall be fully happy.
No longer vulnerable to the pains and the corruption of the world,
But free to roam in the kingdom of kings.
Am I worthy of such dreams?
Or am I too pained to ever be able to appreciate.
I long to be glorified,
In heaven with endless oppertunities.
I watch as the clock slowly ticks away,
Wondering how long it's going to take me to die,
To shed the pain and leave it behind.
Until then I lie waiting restlessly,
For death to come and take me.
Copyright ©
Apolla
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2004-12-14 17:57:16]
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Re: Longing for death
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by Artemis03 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:12:44 PM AEST
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| It's mine dream to. That one re-ocuring dream... But I know it won't be mine to embrace for a while. Deep and very touching. |
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Re: Longing for death
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by Stonedraider23 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:20:28 PM AEST
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| death sounds so easy lets do it together great write tho |
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Re: Longing for death
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by Thegirlwithsolittle on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:05:05 PM AEST
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i feel this so much! i taotally connected i tink thsi all say and it jsut seems to pass so slowly...checkout my poem called her savior plzz comment too, i think you would like it.
good job too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 |
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Re: Longing for death
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by LEMMEN on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:55:49 AM AEST
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Hopefully it will be many of years before death knocks on your door.
You have so many more great writes to be wrote.
But time dose tick faster for some than others.
And this I know. Thanks for commenting on my poem.
Maybe you could read some of mine then my comment might make a little more sence.
Well Written.
~DENNIS~ |
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