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CAN YOU TEACH ME?
Contributed by
LEMMEN
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Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 07:01:41 PM in AEST
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Can you see the poem?
I can see the poem.
Can you feel it when you write it?
I feel it when I write it.
How dose it feel to write what you feel?
It feel's great to share with others my poems.
Do you write the truth?
All words have a bit of truth behind them.
How do you know what to write?
I don't know it just comes to me. The paper is blank, The words just appear, It's kinda weird.
Do you like what you write?
No not all of the time, But It has to be wrote things need to be said. I say them on paper the words I cannot say.
Can you write one for me?
Yeah I can, I can write just about anything.
Will you write one for me?
I don't know you tell me about yourself. Let me get to know you then, I'll write one for you.
What have you written about?
What haven't I written about is the question you should have asked?
I have written on just about everything from a to z.
Can you teach me?
No
You can teach yourself It comes from within.
I can show you thing's
But it's a inner drive that leads me to write these thing's.
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
LEMMEN
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2004-12-14 19:01:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: CAN YOU TEACH ME?
(User Rating: 1 ) by MMISS on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 11:29:18 PM AEST (User
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nice poem dennis! it ask questions we all ask. keep up the great writing. |
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Re: CAN YOU TEACH ME?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:23:57 AM AEST (User
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I write generally about my personal life and interactions with others. Occasionally I will write one that just pops in my head as most of my poems do. It just comes and type it and submit. Heart poetry is my favorite. I think it tells a lot about a person.
Smile Dennis,
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Re: CAN YOU TEACH ME?
(User Rating: 1 ) by witch_derna on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:22:29 PM AEST (User
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A question my daughter has asked me before. All I could tell her was sit down with a pen and paper and just start writing. Write what you feel. Very good write.
Love, MaDonna |
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Re: CAN YOU TEACH ME?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Trisha on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 06:58:39 AM AEST (User
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I liked this it was really good |
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Re: CAN YOU TEACH ME?
(User Rating: 1 ) by DanishPoet on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 05:07:48 PM AEST (User
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Finally i think I know what to answer when people ask me: why and how?
Thanks for the inspiration.
Toke |
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