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my pain for your love
Contributed by
emocutie07
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Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:22:26 PM in AEST
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Tonight I'll paint myself in black and blue
Lift up my skirt reveal a wound or two..
Carved your name into my chest, you whispered "I heart you" but not a single protest
You told me once you loved my laugh, but liked it best when I'd scream
Well here I ' am bleeding on the bathroom floor singing are song into your machine.
I hope your really happy...
I hope you know how much this hurts
I hope you ***** choke on every single word
I didn't mean that darling...its just your slowly killing me...
Can't you see I only aim to please?
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Re: my pain for your love
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 09:38:21 PM AEST
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| powerful write. |
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Re: my pain for your love
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:33:07 AM AEST
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A cute short poem, written so beautifuly. It has a nice flow to it. Good Job
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: my pain for your love
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by Artemis03 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:08:35 PM AEST
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| Very deep, emotional, and so very beautiful. |
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Re: my pain for your love
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:13:19 PM AEST
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Well, I really hope you aren't talking about me...cuz if I'm doing this to you, I had no clue, and it wasn't intentional...other than that, it was very good...
Eternally Yours
Mason |
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Re: my pain for your love
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 11:27:34 PM AEST
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| this is like stepping into a trauma ward. bloody and violent yet tragic and emotional.i hope this wasn't anything caused by a close loved one.(hint hint), awww who am i kidding mason doesn't have it in him to hurt another human being. besides he loves you to much, your all he ever talks about!!!!!! hope you find your peace. |
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Re: my pain for your love
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 07:06:48 PM AEST
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I swear I didn't put Dane up to that ^^
Love you
Mason |
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