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only friend
Contributed by
lonely_boy
on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 12:33:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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with a blade in my hand, and blood on the floor
i'm unable to feel this pain anymore
my only friend is the blade that makes me numb
this feeling i never got from the people i love
these tears fall to the floor, in which my blood poors
though i lay dying, i cut myself some more
no regret for cutting myself again
seeing the blood makes me glad that i've sinned
i don't care if i die by my own hand
taking my own life would make me feel more like a man
though scared of the outcome of when i die
i cut the vain in half as i hysterically cry
i play the songs that remind me of when i smiled
i haven't felt this good in a real long while
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lonely_boy
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2004-12-15 00:33:15]
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Re: only friend
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by Amanda_Interrupted on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 12:50:56 AM AEST
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| Wow.. good poem... I have felt the same way with my blade too.. |
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Re: only friend
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by Sapphire_Blue on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 03:48:45 AM AEST
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| visually intense, written with feeling...and in tears of agony.... |
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Re: only friend
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:01:51 AM AEST
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great write......i hope u dont carry through with this...i have felt this way and thought the knife was my only friend too. please take care. good job again
punka rach
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