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Rusted Blade
Contributed by
missimorticia
on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 01:29:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Jagged lies that cut at you,
Like a rusted razor blade,
Torn flesh that pours out blood,
As you watch your own life fade,
Twisted lies you believe,
Play over in your mind,
Endless searching for something real,
But the truth you'll never find,
Acid tears that fall like rain,burning as they slide,
Inflicting pain upon yourself,as your deepest thoughts you hide,
Tainted faith,you don't believe,you always feel alone,
Tangled love caught up in hate,
Affection never shown,
Your hearts gone black,your blood run cold,
Renounce your faith,your soul you've sold,
So tell me was it worth it?,
For this price you've paid,
The jagged lies still cut at you like a rusted razor blade!
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missimorticia
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2004-12-15 01:29:11]
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Re: Rusted Blade
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 02:18:31 AM AEST
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| You wrote this at 9 ***** you are a dark |
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Re: Rusted Blade
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 06:49:55 AM AEST
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awsum write, i cant believe u wrote this at 9. well done, very heavy.
punka rach |
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Re: Rusted Blade
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 07:08:33 AM AEST
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wow! that's awesome for some thing you wrote when you were only 9!
i don't think i could write some thing with as much power and meaning as you. you really have the touch.
if it helps you to do this then you should defently KEEP IT UP!
it's so truthful... i cut too... i know straight where you're comming from...! |
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Re: Rusted Blade
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by Crash on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 12:51:12 PM AEST
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| This poem suprized me when I read it. I can feel your words in this write as strong as I feel what I've written myself. Thas crazy that you wrote this at 9 years old, what a dark childhood. |
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Re: Rusted Blade
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by Artemis03 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 03:53:30 PM AEST
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| 9 !!! wow. You are very talented. This is one very very deep beautiful write. I loved it..and I will read it again..I bet I will. |
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