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Loneliness
Contributed by
Mangs
on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 11:10:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A voice cries for a helping hand
Loneliness can put things in perspective.
Loneliness can drive you insane.
Loneliness can pit you against the entire synergism of your pea sized brain.
That no on ever gives
Loneliness can be as intimate,
As no companion can ever be.
Loneliness can be an obvious blank,
A void that you can never see.
A passage to a locked up house
Loneliness can etch into the soul,
A deep gash that can never heal.
A beautiful sorrow, thats tangible,
With a tasteable, smellable feel.
Where no one ever lives
Loneliness is that possibility, you will always have to face,
Loneliness is three dimensional, a reality with an edge on space.
A heart beats in a vacuum...
Loneliness can pause the time, and make it all the more lethargic.
It crawls along while in its web, ensnared you hear the seconds tick.
Can you hear the strain?
Loneliness is like a sleeping pill, an overdose can make you sick.
Its a killer drug that you can induce, a psychedelic hallucinative kick.
A sigh dies in the stillness
Loneliness is a paradox
It could be your messiah,
Your magic maker.
Or it could function in the capacity of a relationship speed breaker.
Can you feel the pain?
Copyright ©
Mangs
... [
2004-12-15 11:10:16]
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Re: Loneliness
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 12:01:49 PM AEST
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WOW this had me gripped till the very end...
I feel this................
Hunny this is such a good write....ur talent has really shown through.
love always
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Re: Loneliness
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 05:45:45 PM AEST
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Ok whoaa... Umm wow... This is amazing write... I love this poem because it's true of what you are saying.. Great work
~UnKnOwN BUtTerFLY~ |
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