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fallen prey
Contributed by
krazykat
on
Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 01:30:00 AM in AEST
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after a cold and monsterous rain , filled with flashing lights, a small helpless bird has fallen from his nest, he's scared and alone now, he knows he's fallen prey, to all the passing hunters, on this freezing winter day, he's just hatched only weeks ago, he was left astrey to fend for him self, on this cold winter day, shivering and hungry,and so are passers by, the poor little fella knows what he must do, he knows he must take flight, he must learn to fly he'll be his own teacher, for noone can help him now, he must fight, if he is to servive, so he runs and runs and with all his coviction and with all his might the small determind fella, well he takes flight
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Re: fallen prey
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:26:49 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. i loved the concept. if only i could believe it a little more often =] i think this would be better formated into verses and just not into sentences that look like an essay though. |
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