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(holding inside)
Contributed by
blackrose233
on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 04:04:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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(holding inside)
I am here alone
no calls on the telephone but i dont care
no ones there no ones here no one left to fear
the one to fear is my self alone
as the pain grown near
thinking thoughts i shouldn't think
as the pain grows near
only fear when pain grows inside
never letting go of the past behind
but i must try and try i will untill the sky goes still
I musent go i musent leave a goal i must achive
for i musent leave my friends behind that will not be very kind
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blackrose233
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2004-12-15 16:04:56]
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Re: (holding inside)
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 05:09:51 PM AEST
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Great write...the sadness leaked out of every phrase...You did a wonderful job, with imagery, making me feel the emotion...Wonderful
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