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Hiding Among The Maple Leaves
Contributed by
hoist1atca
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Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:26:02 PM in AEST
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Far to the north beneath a blanket of trees-
Hides a flower amongst the maple leaves-
To sad to shine with colors so bright-
Filled with the pain of loves fading light…
Feeling all alone and empty inside-
Her heart, this flower has chosen to hide-
Seeking shelter from any emotional storm-
Has become, for this blossom the norm…
Life offered her many a selection to make-
So many paths for her to take-
A lifetime of love is that which she chose-
And from this choice her present life arose…
What once she felt to be true-
Has left her alone without a clue-
A wilting flower between thicket and thorn-
From within, a soul forever torn…
Now when the north winds do blow-
Her pain begins to slowly grow-
And her smile fades beneath a blanket of trees-
As this flower of nature hides amongst the maple leaves…
(12-15-2004)
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Re: Hiding Among The Maple Leaves
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:33:01 PM AEST
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awwww this made me cry so very beautiful yet weeping with sadness touched me down deep I feel this I do now Im going to wipe my eyes
Michelle |
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Re: Hiding Among The Maple Leaves
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 09:40:12 PM AEST
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| excellent write. and nice dedication. |
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Re: Hiding Among The Maple Leaves
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 11:21:01 AM AEST
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Wow, this is very beautiful...
I definatly think I've been missing out on reading your poetry. Definatly.
This is fantastic, it flows just perfectly, and every word leaves me wanting to read another one.
Fantastic write.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Hiding Among The Maple Leaves
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 06:18:24 PM AEST
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Joe~
Each verse captured the emotion perfectly. You have quite
a gift. This was beautiful and yet so tragically sad.
With love and light, the wilted flower will once again blossom.
Thank you for sharing this.
~Breezy |
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