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Simulation
Contributed by
sublimination
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Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 06:48:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Simulation
Poison drifting through my veins
Evil bonding me in chains
Unforgiving, rancid minds
None of life was ever kind
Digesting what is left of you
Soon my pain better be through
Always hating what I am
Thinking up some awful scam
Never wanting more than this
Without you, life will be bliss
Forgotten by the unforgiven
Always hating the world I live in
Scorning more than I should
Living underneath the hood
Under the hood where darkness reigns
Under darkness I shall remain
Inside my world, my world of fear
Inside my heart I shed a tear
A tear of hate toward all of you
A tear of light to get me through
A simple mind can change a life
A simple hand with a simple knife
Simplicity will kill us all
Simplicity will make us fall
Im left alone in my own mess
Left alone under the reign of darkness
In the shadow of darkness I see a light
But nothing now is worth the fight
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2002-07-19 18:48:58]
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Re: Simulation
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by skinny-little-punk on
Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 06:51:39 PM AEST
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This is good... sounds like it could be translated well into song lyrics. Do you play any instruments?
I like the vagueness of your poem, because I certinally know what it means for me, but it might mean something else entirely for a different person, and I don't know what you had in mind when you wrote it.
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