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TO BE FREE!!!!!!!!!!
Contributed by
kitty_girl
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Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:50:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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TO BE FREE!!!!!!!!
I wona be free like the birds in the tree,
i wona fly away to heven,
im going home all a lone
with out any one beside me
im going to that place i know
I wona bee free like the birds in the tree
and ill finaly see.
BY KITTY_GIRLXXX
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kitty_girl
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2004-12-16 10:50:08]
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Re: TO BE FREE!!!!!!!!!!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 11:02:43 AM AEST
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Very nice start kitty girl! Watch out for spelling though. A tip I've found (though I don't always follow it). Type it in notepad or wordpad first, then cut and paste to the entry box. That way you don't have to try and check your spelling in this tiny box thing. heh.
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Re: TO BE FREE!!!!!!!!!!
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by givingin on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 11:17:08 AM AEST
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Good job kitty.
MUAH
*~givingin~* |
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