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Yeah... (Dear Dad)
Contributed by
HumGirl18
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Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Hey, screw you
I just wanted you to know
You held my heart
You held my soul
But let's forget that and grow
Today will be my day
I'll make the world my own
I won't care that you're not around
You once were there
But now you're gone
Screw you
Yeah..
I said screw you
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2002-11-28 07:30:00]
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Re: Yeah... (Dear Dad)
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 08:22:56 PM AEST
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| my dad left me too. i liked your poem, but i didnt like the parts with screw in it. i guess its just because i think poems and songs dont need cusswords or fake ones to make your point known, or get your feelings across. i thought you did this very well without the screw you parts in it. thats good for such a short poem. |
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