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untitled
Contributed by
SavingMarion
on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 04:11:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I hold my breath around you
Im failures art
I bite my tongue around you
To satiate the widow now
I long for hours with you
Then question why
I wrap my eyes around you
Im at the start of you and I
I bled for a while today
But Im ok
Im still at the right foot of night
Alls going your way
I made my counterpoint so
Relevant
And now Im feeling rather
Dissonant
I dont need someone whose mouth
Will bleed both ways
Youve exhausted me with
Your rechauffe
I am the last time tonight
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SavingMarion
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2004-12-16 16:11:13]
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 06:00:04 AM AEST
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Of course, having checked out more of your stuff, I realise you've been here since the month of May.
This speaks of frustration in catchy breaks;
"I bite my tongue around you
To satiate the widow now"
I like the imagery used here. |
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