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I want to be forgotten
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 06:02:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I wish I were enough
To really better some ones life
But I am not no matter how hard I try
I just fail everyone that I care for
Im so ***** low that I cant even write
I dont know what to do anymore
Did I ever really know?
What is the point of anything?
Does anything really have a point?
Why do I have to try and die?
And not just die effortlessly?
Why is my life such a mess?
Is it me?
Why am I so alone I wonder
It must be me
Am I something more than ugly?
And am I so easy to hate?
I guess I am when I hate my self
I guess when people say I am to blame
For everything that is wrong in my life
It is true
So thats why I tried to hang my self last night
I was messing around with some rope
And I made it into a noose
I stood up on this thing and
Put my head in it to see if it fit
I slipped and hung my self
Though right now
I wish I would have died on it
I am just so tired really
I dont want to go on anymore
Really do not care if I live or die
I would prefer it if someone would kill me
If I killed my self it would be no surprise
But those who do not know me
Would still wonder why
I do not mind if I leave nothing behind
I think I would like to be forgotten
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Re: I want to be forgotten
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by Unbreakable on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:29:02 PM AEST
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| intense poem...good write...full of sadness and depression |
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Re: I want to be forgotten
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by little_genna on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:08:52 AM AEST
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This poem is rather intense....
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Re: I want to be forgotten
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by jenipher on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 02:47:49 AM AEST
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| hey thas really good i like it alot n thx fer commenting on my poems :) |
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Re: I want to be forgotten
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by witch_derna on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:53:50 AM AEST
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Hmm, I hope this is just a poem and you aren't serious. This is a good write and if you go then I won't have anything to read :) And no one to say "thats not very witch like of you" lol.
Many blessings to you.
MaDonna |
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