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A kiss
Contributed by
blacksabbath026
on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:19:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sweet angel, beware, for just a kiss
Can drive people mad, insane!
Oh sweet devil! Am i insane?
I love you! Was my first,
First true love, has been others
Just cheap imitations!
Kisses without love, wasnt you
Oh divine princess! Matters not,
Matters not hell is your home
Oh Lustful heart! Leave me be!
Let me dwell in my own sorrow
And let me forget this ironic love
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2004-12-16 20:19:30]
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Re: A kiss
(User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsLuster on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 12:40:25 AM AEST
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| I know that struggle. The fine line between love and and lust. It sucks, good way of describing it! I really could see what your struggle is. I would have formed it differently, but that's just me! ^_^ Good job on the poem and it had very powerful feel. |
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