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Malicious Desires
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:22:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I lust for pain both yours and mine
The sight of blood makes everything fine
Your screams of agony brighten my mood
The torment of yours is my daily food
Please stop! is what you plead
But I only cause you to further bleed
Your distressed cries cause the pain to continue
As I further mutilate you
The once Im satisfied I turn to me
For blood I still do long to see
I slit and I gash my broken skin
Digging the knife deeper within
My red crimson blood cascades form my veins
As I enjoy every minute of my long lasting pains
With my twisted mind I carve some more
With malicious desires burning within my core
The sight of agony makes all seem well
In this world disguised as hell
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EternalNight4x
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2004-12-16 20:22:08]
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Re: Malicious Desires
(User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:52:17 PM AEST
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Nice rhythm, its a bit dark but I don't think I have the right to say anythings "too dark" after the ***** I've written.
I read your profile at xanga.com - Its really ***** depressing. No one should hate life so much. Theres no fun in dwelling in an encystment of angst and loathing.
But......... I'm sure you've heard it all before and want me to stfu. So, anyway, nice poem and I wish you well. (^_^)v |
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