|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Monsters
Contributed by
assassinatorgirl
on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 08:53:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
|
Stretched across the bed
Her long body limply lies,
She holds a gun to her head
And trailing her fingers on it sighs.
Shadows creep out
and from the darkness
The monster shouts.
She follows the voice
It steals away her choice
Because it's really a numb feeling
When the sun shines just for you
and you feel like love again
But then It's gone
And you have negative light
The darkness is so thick
The monsters scream
You MUST obey
Running running
But I will trip you
And laugh at your fall
Because, after all
I'm the one calling you.
Copyright ©
assassinatorgirl
... [
2004-12-16 20:53:12]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Monsters
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:25:24 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| ::applauds:: i liked the originality. a different spin to the ending. the endings of "it was me" or "that was me" get tiresome, but yours was different enough for me to enjoy it. excellent write. |
|
|
Re: Monsters
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 05:30:02 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| awesome, i love it, well done!!!!!! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
