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Alone
Contributed by
lionels
on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:57:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Alone:
I am alone. Alone walking this beautiful earth. No one to trust, no where to go. Because we are all alone.
Alone to cope with fear and grief. And to discover where the end may lead. Death? ... probably. Love Peace? No. I am alone. Alone to weep.
Hate is the only way that us singles connect. To set off a bomb, torture and reject. Love is just an act we put on. There is no such thing. And if there ever was, it is all gone.
Some people will say that were all caring souls. but they dont same to mention war and the high death tolls That is because they dont want to face, That the end should come to the human race. But aside from there little want to be truths We are ALL alone, all single and screwed. Masses of singles that avoid the truth. Do you not see that there is no such thing as a group?
Are we that stupid? To stupid to realise? That there is no point to life communication or feeling... It is all an act, meant just to leave us reeling?
Emotions are tricks. Theyre there then theyre gone. Thoughts come from people trying to screw with your mind. Dont trust anyone, not even yourself. Because we are all alone, So keep to yourself.
We are all alone. Just singles in this race. We are all alone, In this wild goose chase.
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lionels
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2004-12-16 21:57:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by frozenintime on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:19:33 PM AEST (User
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great poem..i can really relate |
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Re: Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by hazelnut on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:39:01 PM AEST (User
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This poem had me blown away. Thought provoking work. Great for first effort. Very mature |
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Re: Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 10:56:56 PM AEST (User
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for your age you have some very deep thougts i hope to see more of your work |
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Re: Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Valkyra on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 12:50:19 AM AEST (User
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Simply put... good poem |
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Re: Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by musicisluv7 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:08:59 AM AEST (User
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gr8 poem. i must admit that you're very matire for your age. looking forward to seeing more of your work |
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