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Just another teenage suicide
Contributed by
jenipher
on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:20:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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There's going to be another teenage suicide soon
but does anyone care
would anyone know
another lonely teenager
with self made scars all over
cuts and burns
longing to be happy
thoughts no one should think
all they can seem to find is pain and sadness
not knowing how many fake smiles and laughs they have left
not knowing how much longer they can take it
feeling lost and alone
crying night and day
wishing everyday was their last
then making that wish come true
longing to be happy has finally ended
another teenage suicide has just happened
(BANG)
Copyright ©
jenipher
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2004-12-17 02:20:48]
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Re: Just another teenage suicide
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by tears_of_blood on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:05:29 AM AEST
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| thats was a strong write sad but so true for alot of people i was one but didnt go throw but you said it so right good one. |
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Re: Just another teenage suicide
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:30:10 AM AEST
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| wow i am with out words |
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Re: Just another teenage suicide
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by Amanda_Interrupted on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:59:43 AM AEST
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| I like this. Very creative style and very emotional. Good job! |
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Re: Just another teenage suicide
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by pixie on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:08:41 AM AEST
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a very emotional and very tragic write, well put tho
pixie xx |
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Re: Just another teenage suicide
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by Crash on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:44:17 PM AEST
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| I can feel this, I have been there before. I played russian ruelette myself but thankfully i didn't lose. |
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