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As Long As You're There
Contributed by
Red_October
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:04:22 AM in AEST
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Rather mysterious heart
rearranged not harmonious
likened to dying sounds
and ways to get around
the truth and love
If able to move
I would jump
and yell to the
top of my lungs
not careful to be
politically correct
or even right
since I care
I could be wrong forever
as long as you're there
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Red_October
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2004-12-17 09:04:22]
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Re: As Long As You're There
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by pixie on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:07:15 AM AEST
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awww short and sweet, good write
pixie xx |
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Re: As Long As You're There
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by Scarlett on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 05:04:48 AM AEST
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| lovely x (am starting to run out of original things to say when i comment on your stuff so hope you don't mind if it's short or a bit repetative, i just thought that they still are more than deserving of comments even if they are not original comments!) |
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