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Butterfly
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 05:30:00 PM in AEST
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I am a butterfly
and you are my wings.
Without you...
I'd miss out on many things.
My wings are strong.
They help me glide.
Without you...
I'd barely survive.
You've helped me move one
to higher depths,
taking each obstacle
step by step.
The farther we go,
the farther we fly.
I admit...
I can't deny,
the way you make me feel
is something I've never felt before.
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
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2002-11-28 17:30:00]
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Re: Butterfly
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by Nessiecat on
Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 05:37:48 PM AEST
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Lovely words.
I can really identify with your thoughts, too. That's just how I feel about my man.
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Re: Butterfly
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by OreO on
Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 06:58:30 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. Thanks
for sharing it, i enjoyed reading
this one. Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Butterfly
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 10:26:04 PM AEST
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I'm not a man!!!!!!!
~ Butterfly |
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Re: Butterfly
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 10:27:05 PM AEST
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| You're a dork. |
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Re: Butterfly
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 11:23:25 PM AEST
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IF YOU ARE NOT A MAN THEN THE POEM IS OBVIOUSLY NOT ABOUT YOU.
BESIDES "BUTTERFLY" IS THE NAME OF THE POEM; NOT A PERSON.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Butterfly
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 07:22:12 PM AEST
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This is almost exactly how the woman of most of my writes made me feel until she chopped off my wings!:-(
I say almost Candice as I saw myself more as a dragonfly, but I can still relate well to the feeling of empowerment you describe with most eloquent expression here!
It is at the time the most wonderfully subtle yet powerful way they make you feel! I long for it to last forever!!!
With love
Dean;-) |
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Re: Butterfly
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by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 07:36:04 PM AEST
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Dean, I am glad you can relate to my poem. I enjoy it so much when others can relate to what I have got to say. I hope that this feeling does last for ever!!!! I also would say that a dragonfly would fit you better than a butterfly.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Butterfly
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:04:10 PM AEST
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| I Like This. It's Cute. |
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