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Repitition
Contributed by
atreyuskye
on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:17:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Its happening again
history is repeating itself once again
you came back into my life
now you're gone again
why can't you pick a place
and stay there
you left but where (did you go)
the back of your head is all i see
why do you do these things to me
tears are falling can't you see
how much you mean to me
you said you needed me
as much as i needed you
the touch the feel of you
through and through
i realize the love i want
the love i need
won't come from you
its happening again
history is repeating itself once again
you came back into my life
now you're gone again why can't you pick a place
and stay there
you left but where (did you go)
my heart is torn
cursed with a lovers scorn
this body you've touched is worn
the wanting of being needed
i partly succeeded
i know you still need me in your life
even if you aren't my wife
tears of joy
tears of pain
you're still on my brain
missin' you so much
especially the feel of your touch
the sight of your hands
make my eyes dance
my body thirsts
im going to burst
i want you with me
i need to make you see
its happening again
history is repeating itself once again
you came back into my life
now you're gone again
why can't you pick a place
and stay there
you left but where (did you go)
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Re: Repitition
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by poetmarie on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:36:07 PM AEST
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| Wow. Very intense and emotional. Your rhyming brings well-placed impact. I can relate to this poem in a way. It makes me think of the emotional rollercoastal, the circles we go through in love. |
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Re: Repitition
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by Mangs on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 06:30:49 PM AEST
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Very well written....thoughtful and intense...i can feel your pain...keep writing...
Umang |
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Re: Repitition
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:59:21 PM AEST
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| excellent write and emotion. |
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