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My world
Contributed by
pyro_88
on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:52:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Dark clouds sets in.
Light soon disapears.
Thunder starts in the background.
It seems another storm is rolling in.
Wind picks up leafs and dirt.
Another disaster is about to happen.
Lightening strikes a tree anly 5 feet away.
Wind starts up and feeds the fire.
It spreads so fast.
I don't have times to put it out.
It burns everything in sight.
Finally the rain starts to fall.
Putting the fire out.
Soon the sun will be out.
And i will rebuild what the horror distroyed.
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2004-12-17 14:52:15]
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Re: My world
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:55:43 PM AEST
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| i think the last words in some verses need to be changed just because you have some lines with the same word. like"out" and "in". besides that, good write. |
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