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Accident Scene
Contributed by
Rainydreams
on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:53:41 PM in AEST
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They found fibres on your hands, dear
That said you werent faithful towards the end
I was wondering if it was my friend
That you were seeing as you started to descend
The scene of the accident smelt like a ravine
The men in white and you in a black bag in-between-
A white glow that dethroned the decay
While all my anger was swept away by pain
Blue swirling lights hit covering trees
A crowd had gathered by the yellow tape beam
That defended them from you
God I wish you had defended us before you flew
Like a trapped bird that had ruffled away
I wish you could have talked to me and tried to stay
So now I sit on a green hill wondering why you sit still
Why you are in the grass, in the soil and amongst the past
Mingling with the photos and rubbing against the vast
All I have left is the fractured memory thats been bypassed
By the thought of infidelity
It itches and scratches at me like acne
I dont know who he was but they found his touch
Just knowing that our pureness has been tranquilised is too much
Now I cant seem to believe
That we were the accident scene
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Re: Accident Scene
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by pyro_88 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 02:59:28 PM AEST
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| i like this poem. u did a great job writing it. keep em coming. |
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Re: Accident Scene
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:38:08 PM AEST
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| maybe it should be in the story section..sounds kind of like a story |
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Re: Accident Scene
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by Mangs on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 06:09:56 PM AEST
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very intense and painful....im not sure it does justice to your feelings...im not sure anything can....keep writing..
Umang. |
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Re: Accident Scene
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by CrimsonTears on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:37:41 PM AEST
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i lied this....it was interesting and different....good job.....great poem
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Accident Scene
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:52:54 PM AEST
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| excellent write. very creative and original. |
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