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A Poem for my mom
Contributed by
asheepoo21
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:30:15 PM in AEST
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I know i must move on
but i want you to be a part
and i know you will now watch over me
and i will keep you in my heart
theres a special love that comes from a mom
and only in my heart i can have it now
it seems there should be a reason you left me behind
cause now im walking this path alone and blind
although i know thats not true
this would all be easier
if only i still had you
i will try extra hard to keep walking along
but you must keep your eye on me above
to give me strength and keep me strong
i will keep my love for you until the very end
because theres a helping hand out there that someone will lend
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asheepoo21
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2004-12-17 15:30:15]
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Re: A Poem for my mom
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 03:42:23 PM AEST
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| It's not so much that's she keeps an eye on you as that its that she's right there with you..she's a part of you..inside of you. She made you what you are.. that's wonderful..and you'll grow up being so much like her..as though she's inside of you always.. I'm so sorry she's gone..but as long as you're alive, she lives on.. |
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Re: A Poem for my mom
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by Kay-Kay on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 04:02:03 PM AEST
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i love this poem it is so sad..i alomst cried im so sorry that ur mom is gone...but this is a great poem such emotion and word usage
keep it up~ Kay-Kay~ |
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Re: A Poem for my mom
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 05:43:22 PM AEST
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This is very sad, but so beautifully written.
I am sorry for your loss...Keep her alive in yoyr heart......
Welcome to YPDC..
Jenni |
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Re: A Poem for my mom
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by Mangs on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 06:13:43 PM AEST
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Dont ever let go...she lives inside you....brought tears to my eyes....
Umang. |
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Re: A Poem for my mom
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:33:58 PM AEST
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| i agree with autumn. fantastic write. |
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Re: A Poem for my mom
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by aringb on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:28:29 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem for your mother. She will always be with you. I am sorry for your loss.
Alice |
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Re: A Poem for my mom
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by pixie on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 09:22:52 AM AEST
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wow that was so sad and emotional, must have been hard to express this
*hugs*
pixie xx |
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