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Fault
Contributed by
sicknivesevered
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 04:08:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I split the only thing
I wanted from you
Both parts equal nothing
So now I'm confused
Why can't you be something
That isn't you?
I just want the one thing
Where you were abused
And for this...
I hate myself
Because of this...
You need more help
And for this...
I abhor myself
Because of this...
I am no help
I split the only thing
That you had to give
Both parts equal something
Though you barely live
Yet I can only see nothing
And embrace my shiv
And cut down for that one thing
Which without you can't live
And for this...
I hate myself
Because of this...
You need more help
And for this...
I abhor myself
Because of this...
I am no help
You kept it
And I lost it
And I died
Forever by your side
Copyright ©
sicknivesevered
... [
2004-12-17 16:08:12]
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Re: Fault
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 04:21:26 PM AEST
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| wow, this is REALLY good, well done!!!!!!! |
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Re: Fault
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by witch_derna on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 04:33:22 PM AEST
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Heartfelt write. Very well done.
Blessings.
MaDonna |
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Re: Fault
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by Mangs on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 05:49:16 PM AEST
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intense.....loved it very much...
xx Umang .xx |
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Re: Fault
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:10:51 PM AEST
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| powerful write. |
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