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In the Darkness
Contributed by
witch_derna
on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 04:12:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sitting here gazing at the sky
the agony takes over my breast.
I just need to know why
why now when I'm trying my best?
Eyes swell full, puddles of tears
my body collapses to the ground.
Looking back at all the years
I wonder if an exit can be found.
The cold metal feels good upon me
could this be the answer I want?
I'd be invisable for none to see
no longer here for people to taunt.
I watch as the life drains from me
will the pain ever be ended?
If only the future I could foresee
to see if my heart will be mended.
The struggle is to hard.
The darkness is to dark.
My heart is to marred.
Upon this world I leave my mark. Goodbye.
Copyright ©
witch_derna
... [
2004-12-17 16:12:27]
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Re: In the Darkness
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by shelby on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 04:15:12 PM AEST
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beautiful in its sadness I hope you really dont mean goodbye though
Michelle |
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Re: In the Darkness
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by LEMMEN on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 05:09:25 PM AEST
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Haveing a real bad day I know I'm here right at your side Come and talk with me and we shall find the reasons you should live and not die.
~~LOVE DENNIS~~ |
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Re: In the Darkness
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by Mangs on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 06:18:32 PM AEST
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hang in ther........ :-)
Umang. |
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Re: In the Darkness
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:03:13 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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Re: In the Darkness
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by pixie on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 09:28:37 AM AEST
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that was sad, hard hitting and very deep, I am sorry for your pain
pixie xx |
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