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the good little girl who dirty dances
Contributed by
athena
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 05:32:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
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By day a shy girl sitting in the corner
but at night she breaks loose
and and every boy she dances with she will seduce
Its friday, the lights are low the beats are high
she turns around only to see him
and while she dances the rythems start to fly
she has it in her head now,
she nows who she is,
cause in this music,
her soul lives
she dances till midnight,
and when the dance ends,
she out waiting for a ride with one of her friends
its monday morning,
and everyone still talks
bout how the did the shake or the crypt walk.
she sits alone,
once agian forgetting who she is,
then who walks by but the boy she was with.
as she gets out of her corner,
she remembers now,
how shy she is and how....
she sits back down,
quieted agian,
forever this way and this is how it will end
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athena
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2004-12-17 17:32:50]
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Re: the good little girl who dirty dances
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by athena on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 05:42:59 PM AEST
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sorry 4 all the spellin mistakes!!!!
haha i kinda spead writin it...
*athena |
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Re: the good little girl who dirty dances
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by Artemis03 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 05:44:01 PM AEST
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| FREAK-A-LEEK!!! SHE'S A FREAK.hehehehehe..lol jp! There is always multiple side of a person. just a FREAK is one of your. Luv yaz |
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Re: the good little girl who dirty dances
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by Apolla on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 06:00:13 PM AEST
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| Great write. SOOOO truthful you little freak. |
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Re: the good little girl who dirty dances
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 06:37:51 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. excellent end. |
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Re: the good little girl who dirty dances
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by hot-shot on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 01:51:23 PM AEST
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u doin just f9. keeeeeeep up da gud work
hav fun & hugzzzzzzz
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