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Our Melody
Contributed by
Kitty_cat
on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 06:19:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As I listen to a string of notes
They compose a melody
A tragic song devoted to us
Reminds of you and me
The words shiver down my spine
Music plays in my heart
The pain shakes my entire body
And cruelly tears me apart
The beat plays to our rhythm
It matches how I feel
It shows hurt, love, jealousy
A feeling so painful, so real
With each tender, gentle strum
I feel a heartstring go
I remember you here, here with me
I don't want to let you go
I remember holding you close to me
While this song played
Hoping that moment would last forever
As in your arms, we swayed
I remember being in this dark corner
I was alone with you
I remember fireworks, explosions, sparks
Sharing what I thought could never be true
And as I remember bitter sweet times
I come back to painful reality
And ask and wonder what could have been
As I listen to our melody
Copyright ©
Kitty_cat
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2004-12-17 18:19:05]
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Re: Our Melody
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 01:19:20 PM AEST
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| As I read I saw a guitar string break..awwwww. good job. |
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Re: Our Melody
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by savedbydeath on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 02:33:15 PM AEST
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aww sad write,i really liked this,full of emotions,i can definilty relate,have u ever heard of "broken"by seether and amy lee?well anyways that was the last song that my ex and i danced to,and everytime i hear it i tend to cry remebering all the good times,especially that last dance,anyways,awesome write,dont stoip writen ur terrific!!
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