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Give me a chance
Contributed by
deathly_rose
on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 06:59:34 PM in AEST
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Day by day,
I see you in the hall...
I walk by, yet seem to be un noticed.
Is it that you don't like me (even though you dont know me)?
Or is it that you fear that your friends will dislike you afterward?
Well whatever the reason, I don't know why,
but no matter the answer, I still have feelings towards you...
Looking at you as you pass by,
I dont know what it is about you,
you just make me want to be myself...
Daily I wish that we could talk,
just like two average people,
just....................... friends
Only have we talked once,
I know that it's not a big deal,
but for me it is...
It makes me somehow have a feeling that maybe we could be friends...
that day has to be soon,
for at the end of this school year you will be gone...
Gone from this school,
away from my mind...
If only you'd give me one chance,
just one chance to prove that I AM a good person,
that I AM a fun/funny person...
But I fear that that day will never come...
Will it ever come?
Please say it will,
I know what it feels like to be rejected...
rejected not for who I am.. but how I dress...
I'm just afraid that you'll treat me the same...
Just thinking I'm another face in a crowd...
well I'm not... I am ME, and I'm best at being myself...
I only wish you could see that,
I only wish for that conversation to come...
If only I wasn't so shy,
if only I didn't care what you thought,
if only I could show you how I felt...
If only....
You'd give me a chance
*~Alicia~*
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Re: Give me a chance
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:32:06 PM AEST
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| good write. some things change and some things never do. |
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Re: Give me a chance
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by athena on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:03:25 PM AEST
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o wow...i thought this was my friends poem...haha i clcked the wrong poem...im glad i did tho...verry very good...i feel for ya...
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Re: Give me a chance
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 06:17:19 AM AEST
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Aww a high school crush (im just assuming your in high school) i know this might not be a good advise but if you let him know how you feel he might be feeling the same. anyways good write.
Hugs,
Jane |
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