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One Day..Maybe
Contributed by
Artemis03
on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:12:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The clouds that cover my rays of sun
Making me want to run.
Run from truth, the hurt, my fears
I can run, yes, yet I can't hide as though it appears.
Constantly trapped in overwhelming thoughts
Ones that have me feeling so distraught.
When will I wake up to a better place
And have my worse erased?
I know I know , things dont come easy
I already realize this, just believe me.
Maybe I need time, just maybe
I can find my rainbow's end and see
The pot of gold
And inside where my hopes, dreams of clearer days unfold.
Unfold into a true fairy tale story
And end with a wonderous memory.
Copyright ©
Artemis03
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2004-12-17 19:12:02]
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Re: One Day..Maybe
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:26:12 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: One Day..Maybe
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by athena on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:58:49 PM AEST
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very good...love the nice out come
hehe
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Re: One Day..Maybe
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by emocutie07 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:48:18 PM AEST
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| I loved the ending, great write... I hope you find your rainbow..and may all your dreams come true |
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