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My Suicide
Contributed by
Artemis03
on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:47:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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In the coldness of the night
I sit alone with a jagged knife.
"Just me and you...just us two."
I feel no regret...no remorse
no feeling of turning back
from in front of that blade, I sat.
Looking out the window beside me
The moonlight reflecting of the knife so brightly
Calling me, to my suicide
I take the knife and hold it high
Tears running down my face
as the droplet fill my heart's empty space.
I say to myself, " Good-bye to all."
As I glide that jagged knife across.
I take my last look to the world outside
breathlessly to my kness I fall.
Knife still grasped in my hand
falls loose to the floor, just as the blood from the window pane.
There I lay, and there i'll stay
As the blackness wins my mind
Just me and that jagged blade.
Now along with the blood...of my suicide.
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Artemis03
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2004-12-17 19:47:41]
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Re: My Suicide
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by athena on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 07:52:26 PM AEST
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so deep artemis! very good write
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Re: My Suicide
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 08:28:19 PM AEST
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| reminds me of desolantdreamer's poems of late. great write. |
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