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deeessemmfourtr301pointtwo0
Contributed by
noid_schizoid
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Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 09:48:42 PM in AEST
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solo, so low
character flaw
hardy haw
imitate raw emotings
zanified
ostracized
inking lies
destroying any little type of beauty
please don't try to understand
either to even hold my hand
responsiveness just isn't my
sugar in the cup of tea
or flower to the bumble bee
nigh,
all I ever wanted to understand and be
left long ago
it left a hollow blackened me
there's the man
you see
destroyed, declawed, defeated
impotent, insolent, isolated
so don't try to get through
or break down the what-woo
realize that the end was long ago
decades
eons
read between the lines
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noid_schizoid
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2004-12-17 21:48:42]
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Re: deeessemmfourtr301pointtwo0
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by Scarlett on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 04:59:50 AM AEST
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this is my favourite of the poems you have posted, you are right about being obscure - i didn't try to understand, not sure where it would have taken me!
liked this bit particularly
"all I ever wanted to understand and be
left long ago"
have never seen anything quite like your work - hope you take that as the compliment it is meant as!
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