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What is it like.. please tell me!!
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 01:47:59 AM in AEST
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What is it like to be truly loved?
when your never kept
and people walk out on you and never return?
What is it like to be understood?
when there is no one who understands you
no one who understands what you feel and why you feel it
WHat is it like to matter in the end of it all ?
when you never matter
and you get left behind with out a blink of an eye
Peace and hope
JENNI
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Re: What is it like.. please tell me!!
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 01:56:02 AM AEST
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| Great write Jenni! If I knew the answers, I'd tell you. Keep it up! Love Ya! |
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Re: What is it like.. please tell me!!
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by Butterat_Zool on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 02:35:54 AM AEST
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| This arguably isn't a poem, but your blatancy makes your angst plenty obvious. The biggest merit this piece has is that it offers a unique contradiction whereby the persona exists as both loved, understood, and significant as well as unloved, misunderstood, and insignificant all at the same time. Whether this was intentional or not, that duality redeems this piece, and suggests that somewhere, under your confusion (which you'll sort through in time), there is potential for you to write something great some day. Sincerely, Butterat Zool. |
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Re: What is it like.. please tell me!!
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 02:37:55 AM AEST
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Jenni this is such a good write, very thought provoking.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: What is it like.. please tell me!!
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 03:14:51 AM AEST
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Very good, it has certianly started me thinking.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: What is it like.. please tell me!!
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by Doriens_Picture on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 03:36:22 AM AEST
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all these things can hurt even if they are good
i truly love this write |
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Re: What is it like.. please tell me!!
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 03:45:08 AM AEST
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| great job! |
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Re: What is it like.. please tell me!!
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by LEMMEN on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 06:06:48 AM AEST
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If i had the answer i'd be rich.
But i don't it's something we all learn with time.
Good write.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: What is it like.. please tell me!!
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 06:58:39 AM AEST
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Jenni
Very well put. It sounds like a normal teenager with all the hopes and doubts of growing up.You are special and if others don't see thats their problem---love yourself first.
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Re: What is it like.. please tell me!!
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by Dan666 on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 09:19:26 AM AEST
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good write
Dan666 |
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Re: What is it like.. please tell me!!
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by pixie on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 09:31:50 AM AEST
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a very good write, emotional
pixie xx |
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Re: What is it like.. please tell me!!
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by hoist1atca on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 10:18:07 AM AEST
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This is a very good write-
You seem to have felt love yet do not understand its true meabing0
you are somewhat lucky in that sense-
But I say that one must write what they feel,
not what they think-
Thoughts change from moment to moment,
feelings remain as they are first felt...
If you are comfortable with your words never allow anyone to change your choice of words...Sory I spoke so long.
Jpe |
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Re: What is it like.. please tell me!!
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 02:44:16 PM AEST
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this arguably isn't a poem and monkeys arguably
don't need bananas which arguably have merit as a fruit not a poem,
but still I read it and arguably I liked the
last stanza the best
and it's best merit arguably
is that I had something to say about it.
Don't you agree?
--Ghosty |
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Re: What is it like.. please tell me!!
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:11:45 AM AEST
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Hmm. wow a really thought provoking poem..I like the way you contrdicted yourself to get the point across without acctually saying it....wow....
Clark |
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Re: What is it like.. please tell me!!
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:11:22 AM AEST
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Yes, what is it like? I loved it Jennittude. Written with true Jennittude :-)
Thank you for sharing & take care.
Tim
:-)
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Re: What is it like.. please tell me!!
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by 2manytears on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:48:53 AM AEST
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really good write it made me think a lot
~kristina |
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