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MIDNIGHT
Contributed by
lemmen
on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 07:04:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Midnight is a time for lovers
and their dreams
To come alive
To unleash their wild fantasy
To enrich their soul
Make love flourish and
survive
Wild passionate dreams
come alive at midnight
over all land's and sea's
Especially when you are with me
Upon the endless sea of
matrimony
I GIVE THIS RING UNTO THEE
With all my love that I can give
May you say yes and grant me
my dream.
Which I believe is in you
May our love flourish and
survive with passionate dreams
And know that this midnight
with the stars shooting bye
shall forever be yours
And I hope you shall forever
be mine
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
lemmen
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2004-12-18 07:04:39]
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Re: MIDNIGHT
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by Ada on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 07:18:53 AM AEST
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| Your poem is nice... I'd love to hear your comments about my poems... |
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Re: MIDNIGHT
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 07:34:02 AM AEST
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That was so beautifuly writen, a sweet poem for your special one.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: MIDNIGHT
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by pixie on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 09:32:38 AM AEST
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awww a very lovely poem I am suyre she will love it :)
pixie xx |
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Re: MIDNIGHT
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by Doriens_Picture on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 10:31:06 AM AEST
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| a great write dennis but i would have like to see it with rhymes coz i think it would be awsome to have thown in a few in lines that would make it stand out |
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Re: MIDNIGHT
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by witch_derna on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:37:08 AM AEST
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I shall forever be your wife
I shall forever be yours
from the first night
to forever forth :)
I LOVE ONLY YOU !!!!
MaDonna
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