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manufactured Inspirato
Contributed by
Sy
on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 03:53:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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blue underlying layer
red surface affixing, confusing
without a hope, without a prayer
I'm addicted, fate sealed
closed case, shut door
trancending, outer layer pealed
controlling you see
controlling the world, not mine
but not controlling me, you see
atleast alone I can never
dissapoint myself
no not me, not ever
Copyright ©
Sy
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2004-12-18 15:53:58]
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Re: manufactured Inspirato
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 08:09:42 AM AEST
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An obscure piece of poetry.
Rather symbolical, in regards to colour.
“Blue…Red”
An interesting contrast.
Just as I, you seem a little cynical, “fate sealed
closed case, shut door”.
Addictions line the path of my life, thus I can relate.
A very pessimistic outlook, again, just as I!
You are a realist of sorts!
I admire that.
Great flow of words and structure.
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