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messenger of love
Contributed by
KOZMICSPIRID
on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 06:03:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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LIVING
TOUCHING
KEEPING THE FAITH
A FRESH START ON A CLEAN SLATE
SEEKING FINDING -REVIVING THE TRUTH
SPREADING THE WORD TO THE RUTHFULL YOUTH
YOU ARE THE MESSENGER
THE ONE FROM ABOVE
SPREADING THE WORD
OF PEACE AND LOVE
PUNGENT GARBAGE LITTERS THE BEACH
THE AVERAGE MINDS YOU MUST TEACH
SPIRITUAL NOT RELIGIOUS YOU ARE INDEED
YOU CARRY THE SEED
OF THIS WICKED BREED
AND IT'S CONSTANT NEED
TO QUENCH IT'S MATERIALISTIC GREED
Copyright ©
KOZMICSPIRID
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2004-12-18 18:03:58]
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Re: messenger of love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ada on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 06:28:53 PM AEST
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| In the beginning and end of the poem, your rhyming was good... But in the middle of the poem, you missed 4 lines. Overall, your poem was nice. Do comment on my poems too... |
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